Nice, but could be better
I liked this video, however, as far as random videos goes, this one was a bit slow. It had some very funny actions, don't get me wrong. Despite these elements, the presentation was a bit to sluggish in some parts, losing the random feel of the moments.
Also, in the brain scene the audio was a bit weird, to the extent that it wasn't as enjoyable to listen to. I'm looking forward to more episodes, keep up the good work.
The animation was very nice and truly interesting. I also found that although the music was off at the beginning, it seemed to fit a bit better when it approached the end. The main problem with the music sync was that the music started a second too late, which threw off everything else.
The other large problem was the keyboard animation sync, in which the faceless character hit the notes at very odd time in correspondence with the music. Nice work, can't wait for more.
Thankyou, anonymous person o.O. I need to figure out the music deal. It is only off sync when I upload it. Anyway, i'm working on a more high-quality flash, with the toadies "i come from the water." I'll let you know in an e-mail =). And keep voting five on this EVERY DAY :D so I can get a good batting average to start a collab on this account.
The flash was alright, however the voices were sometimes really hard to hear, especially when the tape was giving instructions. I also personally think this was almost too similar to "Lice Capades" by South Park. Similar enough that it wasn't too intersting to watch. Maybe if the plot was changed just a bit (not just having them talking) it would be more interesting and appealling. Otherwise it was a very nice flash.
Just a sec
Matrim528, you are wrong, Ninjas and Samuri are both Japanese.
On a different note, a very nice job with the animation. Not too complex, and that is good. I really like the generic person you created.
This is just radom and silly, not really needed on the poral. The yelling was really annoying, much like most of the other parts of the flash.
Could be better
I really like the plot and effects, however the photography isn't very good. the comic book style is an interesting approach, but if you took time to turn this into an actually flash animation, it wuld be much better. I found the narration very amusing, although I don't think that is the reaction you would have liked to hear.
It wasn't too bad. However it wasn't very good either. The language and nuditiy was out of place, and the jokes produced nothing more than an eyebrow raise.
The movie had no substance. These short clips, reguardless of their quality, almost never make it. Put in some length and some sort of plot and try again.
A plot? yeah. Here's a plot for ya. Pizza guy is all p.o.'d because his girlfiend leaves him. so he decides to eat pizza until he dies. the end. Really engaging. It's better this way, trust me. Besides, the only words n this are "pizza" and "gulp." There was no attempt at a storylne, therefore this review is pointless.
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